Monday, November 29, 2010

"Come on John" Yelled Alan " Jump jump"
" No it's to high" Said John in a wimpy voice.
" Come on you can do it I did it hundred times before" said Alan praledly ".
you can do it the water is deep very deep".
"John yelled I can't do it" said John
" I will live if you don't do it" said Alan in a big voice.
" OK OK said John"
splash John did it and he was praled

Wednesday, November 24, 2010

free writing

we got a new dog its name is addie its fer is black and creemy coled she is very very bity and farst she is 8 and a harf weehs old . in the holldays we are gooing to merar island it is a bird santrry and we are not a lowd to make firs on the bay but we can go sper fishing and cieaking the will be fun kenndey is not on the computer and it is not on

Sunday, October 17, 2010

enzo

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writing

I was playing my sax and my mum was happing me.
As she went out of the room I tornd to say thanks but as I did I sore the most pitirfing spider in the world.
It was bigger than a golf ball and smaller than a tenns ball.
It was as black as the night sky and as tirafing as a spider can be.
Its legs were fild with black here and the rust of its biddy. It put shivers up my spin as it crold with its 8 legs slowly down my bed room whole.
When I sore it I yelp and got mum to see it even she was skid. She slamed a big book at the whole and the spider got in betwin it and died.Splat. We put it in the tolit. But as I thort for a mint it was all over a thort came into my head what if there was mare ...

Sunday, September 19, 2010

put it together

people looking at you. How you fell. are you norves or not. what you have on. the lits. something like as big as a plane.

I'm on the earg of enbarsmint if I muck up that would be bad. At the monint I'm filing like I'm in a big avant. people are looking at me so minny people are that makes me even more nerves I don't like that at all. I have this gold roub on I don't like that other how can this get wors and I hop it dose not but it dus I have to go infrunt of at list 800 people NO. but there are good bits about going infrunt of 800 people cous that mack me better at going infrint of that minny people

Monday, September 13, 2010

WALT make tired writing come to life


I sprinted down the soper step hill as fast as I can as if I was in the Olympics . I was exhausted

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Tuesday, August 31, 2010

Free writing

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