Monday, September 13, 2010

WALT make tired writing come to life


I sprinted down the soper step hill as fast as I can as if I was in the Olympics . I was exhausted

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1 comment:

  1. That's good writing Caleb. I liked it how you described your feelings but next time you could make it longer so it would make your writing more interesting.But other than that good writing!

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