Wednesday, December 1, 2010

athletics

I felt nevus and hot in the boiling hot sun I was going to run as fast as I can to jump over the sand. I had to get a three that was my goal.
I was running as fast as a tiger I was going to lip and as I lipped I could fill the air flowing throe my hear.
Thomp I land some one said to me I had got a three I was so proud of my self I had made my goal I passed my challenge.
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  1. NathalieDecember 1, 2010 at 1:26 PM

    That is a good piece of writing Caleb.I liked it hoe you explained how you felt but next time you could check your spelling because you still have spelling errors.

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